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* Help with writing a question.Userme
`* Re: Help with writing a question.Ken Blake
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 by: Userme - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 16:04 UTC

Hi I have a list of salespersons and the amount sold by each one. Like the following:

Mary 100
Tao 200
Jack 300
Sarah 240
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I want to ask users who are going to read this table a question to find out which sales person came as number one in term of amount he/she was sold. Could you please let me know which question of the following is better? or how you would write it yourself? Thank you very much
+++++++
What is the name of the salesperson who sold the most?
Whos sales were the highest?
Whos sales were the biggest?
Which sales person sold more than the rest?

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 by: Ken Blake - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 17:00 UTC

On 1/12/2023 9:04 AM, Userme wrote:
> Hi I have a list of salespersons and the amount sold by each one. Like the following:
>
> Mary 100
> Tao 200
> Jack 300
> Sarah 240
> ++++++
> I want to ask users who are going to read this table a question to find out which sales person came as number one in term of amount he/she was sold. Could you please let me know which question of the following is better? or how you would write it yourself? Thank you very much
> +++++++
> What is the name of the salesperson who sold the most?
> Whos sales were the highest?
> Whos sales were the biggest?
> Which sales person sold more than the rest?

They are all OK, but I prefer "Whose sales were the highest?"

Note that the first word of that and the next one is "whose."

--
Ken

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 by: Userme - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 17:27 UTC

On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 12:00:32 PM UTC-5, Ken Blake wrote:
> On 1/12/2023 9:04 AM, Userme wrote:
> > Hi I have a list of salespersons and the amount sold by each one. Like the following:
> >
> > Mary 100
> > Tao 200
> > Jack 300
> > Sarah 240
> > ++++++
> > I want to ask users who are going to read this table a question to find out which sales person came as number one in term of amount he/she was sold. Could you please let me know which question of the following is better? or how you would write it yourself? Thank you very much
> > +++++++
> > What is the name of the salesperson who sold the most?
> > Whos sales were the highest?
> > Whos sales were the biggest?
> > Which sales person sold more than the rest?
> They are all OK, but I prefer "Whose sales were the highest?"
>
> Note that the first word of that and the next one is "whose."
>
> --
> Ken

Thank you so much for the help.

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 by: Snidely - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 22:29 UTC

Userme suggested that ...
> On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 12:00:32 PM UTC-5, Ken Blake wrote:
>> On 1/12/2023 9:04 AM, Userme wrote:
>>> Hi I have a list of salespersons and the amount sold by each one. Like the
>>> following:
>>>
>>> Mary 100
>>> Tao 200
>>> Jack 300
>>> Sarah 240
>>> ++++++
>>> I want to ask users who are going to read this table a question to find out
>>> which sales person came as number one in term of amount he/she was sold.
>>> Could you please let me know which question of the following is better? or
>>> how you would write it yourself? Thank you very much +++++++ What is the
>>> name of the salesperson who sold the most? Whos sales were the highest?
>>> Whos sales were the biggest? Which sales person sold more than the rest?
>> They are all OK, but I prefer "Whose sales were the highest?"
>>
>> Note that the first word of that and the next one is "whose."
>>
>> --
>> Ken
>
> Thank you so much for the help.

Bonus suggestion: Your first sentence, which is directed to us in AUE,
has a wrong word ("was") and a phrase that isn't quite right ("came
as").

As a minimal change, the sentence would be better (IMO) as: "I want to
ask users who are going to read this table a question to find out which
sales person came out as number one in term of amount he/she has sold".

An even better rewrite, I think, would be: "I want users to be able to
show how to determine which salesperson has sold the most, and to name
which came out as the sales leader."

(Note that in American usage, "salesperson" is one word, while "sales
leader" would still be two words.)

/dps

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