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Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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 by: W.Dockery - Mon, 30 May 2022 15:40 UTC

"General Zod" wrote in message
> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>
>> Chorus Six
>>
>> Dollars in the bucket
>> collect for the street singer.
>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>> points out the parrots.
>>
>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>> after the parade.
>> People start looking really strange again.
>>
>> I must seem likewise to them
>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>> I'd draw these people with words
>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>
>> They pass and fade
>> part of the parade.
>>
>> On this really old wall
>> good view from up here.
>> Forever is a long time
>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>
>> -Will Dockery

>> Is this a re-write?

Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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 by: General-Zod - Wed, 1 Jun 2022 20:06 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> "General Zod" wrote in message
>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>
>>> Chorus Six
>>>
>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>> collect for the street singer.
>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>> points out the parrots.
>>>
>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>> after the parade.
>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>
>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>
>>> They pass and fade
>>> part of the parade.
>>>
>>> On this really old wall
>>> good view from up here.
>>> Forever is a long time
>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>
>>> -Will Dockery

>>> Is this a re-write?

> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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 by: General-Zod - Fri, 3 Jun 2022 20:35 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> "General Zod" wrote in message
>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>
>>> Chorus Six
>>>
>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>> collect for the street singer.
>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>> points out the parrots.
>>>
>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>> after the parade.
>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>
>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>
>>> They pass and fade
>>> part of the parade.
>>>
>>> On this really old wall
>>> good view from up here.
>>> Forever is a long time
>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>
>>> -Will Dockery

>>> Is this a re-write?

> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

Having second read, better than ever......

Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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 by: W-Dockery - Wed, 8 Jun 2022 15:17 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

I agree that I was nailing it goes n that era.

🙂

Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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 by: W-Dockery - Mon, 13 Jun 2022 07:10 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Good morning my friend and thanks again for the positive feedback.

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 by: W.Dockery - Sun, 19 Jun 2022 14:44 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Good morning my friend, and thanks for the positive feedback.

🙂

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 by: W-Dockery - Sun, 31 Jul 2022 01:48 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Good evening, Zod, and thanks again for the endorsement.

🙂

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 by: W-Dockery - Tue, 9 Aug 2022 09:22 UTC

"General Zod" wrote in message
> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Thanks again for the nod, General Zod.

🙂

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 by: General-Zod - Fri, 12 Aug 2022 21:11 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> "General Zod" wrote in message
>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>
>>> Chorus Six
>>>
>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>> collect for the street singer.
>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>> points out the parrots.
>>>
>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>> after the parade.
>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>
>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>
>>> They pass and fade
>>> part of the parade.
>>>
>>> On this really old wall
>>> good view from up here.
>>> Forever is a long time
>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>
>>> -Will Dockery

>>> Is this a re-write?

> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

I thank you for writing all these great poems...!

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 by: W.Dockery - Sun, 14 Aug 2022 16:20 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Good afternoon, thanks again.

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 by: General-Zod - Tue, 16 Aug 2022 20:11 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> "General Zod" wrote in message
>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>
>>> Chorus Six
>>>
>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>> collect for the street singer.
>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>> points out the parrots.
>>>
>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>> after the parade.
>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>
>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>
>>> They pass and fade
>>> part of the parade.
>>>
>>> On this really old wall
>>> good view from up here.
>>> Forever is a long time
>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>
>>> -Will Dockery

>>> Is this a re-write?

> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

As said, one of your best....

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"General Zod" wrote in message
> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>

> As said, one of your best....

Thanks again, my friend.

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General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Thanks again my friend.

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 by: W-Dockery - Mon, 5 Sep 2022 06:11 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Good morning, thanks again.

🙂

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 by: W-Dockery - Sat, 10 Sep 2022 00:23 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Another poem Jim Senetto might enjoy.

🙂

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 by: W-Dockery - Sun, 11 Sep 2022 23:48 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Thanks again my friend.

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 by: W.Dockery - Wed, 14 Sep 2022 11:30 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

As another day dawns, I tend to agree.

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 by: W.Dockery - Fri, 16 Sep 2022 20:15 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

Good afternoon, thanks again.

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 by: General-Zod - Fri, 29 Mar 2024 19:05 UTC

W.Dockery wrote:

> General-Zod wrote:

>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>> "General Zod" wrote in message
>>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>>
>>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>>
>>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>>> after the parade.
>>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>>
>>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>>
>>>>> They pass and fade
>>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>>
>>>>> On this really old wall
>>>>> good view from up here.
>>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>>
>>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>>> Is this a re-write?

>>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

>> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

> As another day dawns, I tend to agree.

Right on...

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